Our opening can hopefully be of the same quality and create the same effect of bemusement which will give the audience an effect of them wanting more.
Sound
Diegetic
Thunder
Birds singing
Sniger/ laugh of Donnie Darko
Leaf blower sound
Sound of bike pulling up (push bike)
Sound of bike being pushed onto the ground.
Non Diegetic
Buzzing sound
Sonar sound
Xylophone sound (small tune) Minor key
Female singer/ Choir
New track starts: Guitar, Drums, Piano, Lyrics (male voice)
Editing
Fade into longshot
Sound bridge of thunder and fade out
Fade in and increasing of volume of buzzing sound
Selective sound of birds singing (loud)
volume of sonar sound varies (up and down)
Birds fade back in
Xylophone fades in
Female singing voice/ Choir fades in
Motivated cut to landscape
Sonar sound fades back in
Title fades in and fades out as the light expands from the title
Meets climax and imploding sound
Start of more upbeat sound
Camera Tecniques
90 degree pan from right to straight on done with a handy cam
Extreme long shot looking forward
180 degree rule break
Camera man walks around donnie turning into a mid shot as he gets closer
Closeup of face when he starts smiling
Long shot pan surveying the landscape (shot of mountains)
Mise en scene
Mountainous landscape
Road
Body in road
Revealed to be main character 'Donnie Darko' In pyjamas
Pyjamas are red and white checked trousers with white long sleeved top

Some interesting observations - but you needed to write a shot list and then evaluate your findings?
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